A/N: This story takes place between episode 6x16 (coda) and the end of season 7. You'll notice in further chapters why I chose that specific episode. I do NOT own criminal minds (sadly), because if I did, I wouldn't have killed Maeve (spoiler!). The only characters I own are Michelle and the others I made myself. I hope you like it!
Chapter One: The Beginning
Michelle’s point of view
It was a warm night on the 6th of July. When I looked at my alarm clock, it was 23:17. I was drawing. It didn’t matter that it was late, because I had to finish it. I was drawing a wedding picture of my parents. The scene where they kissed. Tomorrow they would be married for 12 years, so it had to be finished.
A few minutes later, I heard something. Someone was walking upstairs. It couldn’t be one of my parents, because they always went to bed around ten o’clock. I heard a person open the door to my parents’ bedroom. Then, I heard the most awful sound a child could possibly hear: screaming of my parents followed by two gunshots. I froze. Then, I heard someone open the door again, and walk downstairs. I waited till he or she was gone, to check on my parents. I was very nervous. What if they were dead? What if there was blood everywhere? But I had to check, because if they were still alive, I had to call 911. So I grabbed my iPhone and walked to the door of my parents room. When I opened it, I was in shock. My parents were shot near the heart. But on the walls was written: “M, you’re next”. It was written with my parents blood. I grabbed my iPhone from the floor, unaware that I had dropped it. I called 911.
The next morning, the BAU stood in front of my door. I was in the living room, when an agent asked me if I needed some water. He also asked me to come outside, to talk.
“You are Michelle Woods, right?” the agent asked. He was tall, had brown hair and brown eyes, a nice style of clothes and he was pretty handsome.
“Yes I am” I was shaking.
“I am dr. Spencer Reid. I’m with the BAU. May I ask you a few questions?” he said.
“Sure, dr. Reid”
“Call me Spencer. Did you hear anything of what happened?” he asked carefully.
“Yes, because I was wide awake then. I was drawing. Then I heard someone walk upstairs. I heard my parents’ scream, two gunshots, then he or she walked downstairs and when he or she was gone, I wanted to know if my parents were still alive.”
Spencer wrote everything down and asked me to pack some stuff, because I had to sleep somewhere else till they would catch the killer. So I walked upstairs to my room, packed my schoolbag, put some clothes in it, my laptop, iPod and iPhone, chargers, and my drawing stuff. I walked outside and followed Spencer to the car. We both sat on the back seat, waiting for another agent to drive. He introduced himself as Derek Morgan. When he began to ride to the BAU office, I was so tired, because I hadn’t slept after what happened. I let my head rested on Spencer’s shoulder, and he put an arm around me. Then, I fell asleep, knowing that I would be safe with him. I could feel it.
A/N: How was it? Did you like it? I hope so.
bye xxx
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maandag 8 juli 2013
woensdag 1 mei 2013
my Moreid fanfiction story part 1
hello, in my previous post I told you that I write Moreid fanfiction myself. I don't think they are very good, but I'm growing in my writing skills because I write every day. Today I wanted to post the first chapter/part/story, so here it is:
Chapter One: The Beginning
Spencer is struggling. He always felt something for JJ. Last year he was in love with Maeve. But now… he’s developed a crush on Derek Morgan. He cannot think clearly anymore, because of Derek. He cannot sleep anymore, because of Derek. He wants to tell him about his feelings, but he’s afraid of his reaction, because they have been co-workers and friends for eight years now.
A few weeks later, Spencer decided to tell him. He told him that he wanted to talk to him alone, so after work, they went outside for a walk. After ten minutes of silence, Derek asked what’s on his mind. “I’m struggling…” Spencer said.
“About what?”
“About my feelings… for you. I love you…”
Spencer waited for a reaction, staring down at the ground. When he didn’t get a reaction after 45 seconds, he looked up at Derek. Derek raised his hand to touch Spencer’s face. Then… his head came slowly closer to Spencer’s… Till their lips found each other.
After minutes of kissing, Spencer suggested to go back to Derek’s car, so they can drive to his house to talk about what happened.
When they got there, Spencer felt a little uncomfortable, because he has never been to Derek’s house. The inside is a little sloppy, but Spencer didn’t minds. He sat down on a chair near Derek’s bed, where he was sitting.
“Where do you wanna talk about?” did Derek ask.
“About me, about us… We were both into girls. And since a few weeks, the only thing I could think about… was you. Your smiles, you saying ‘pretty boy’, your touches… Everything. And when you kissed me, in the middle of the street, where everybody could see us… I don’t know what to think.”
“I love you too, Spencer”
Derek looked Spencer in his eyes, so deeply, as he had never did with anyone before.
After two hours of talking, Spencer suggested to go home, because it’s late. But Derek told him that he could stay the night. Spencer was a little uncomfortable with that, because he had never slept with someone. But he decided to stay.
They talked and drank some, before they went to bed. They slept together in one bed, because Derek just only had one bed. Spencer fell asleep soon, because this day couldn’t have been more perfect. Derek watched him sleep and put his arm around him.
In the morning, when Spencer woke up, Derek was already out of bed.
“Derek, where are you?”
“In the kitchen, pretty boy!”
Derek was making breakfast for his co-worker.
“Derek, can we talk?” did Spencer ask.
“Sure pretty boy, where do you wanna talk about?”
“Why did you kiss me yesterday?”
“Because I like you…”
Derek walked to Spencer, with breakfast made for him. He put it on the nightstand. He gave him a kiss. Spencer answered his kiss by kissing him back softly, while he still was still in bed. Derek began to kiss him harder, and set his hands on Spencer’s hips, moving them under his shirt.
“Stop, Derek, we can’t do this. This isn’t right!”
Spencer tried to push him away, but he won’t succeed. Derek is too strong. Derek held Spencer by his wrists. He calmed down.
“Sorry Derek, I’m really sorry. It’s just new to me, all of this.”
“It’s also new to me.”
“It’s just going so fast. One moment we were just talking and the other moment you kissed me. When I was almost asleep, you put your arm around me. And then in the morning, you made me breakfast and tried to go further than kissing. I’m not saying I don’t like it, It’s just… I never really had a relationship before with someone I could see and touch everyday.”
“It’s OK if you want me to slow down, just tell me. All I wanna do is make you happy.” Was Derek’s reaction with a smile.
This was my first chapter/part/story. If you see any mistakes, please comment that below so I can change it.
I hope you like it.
bye xxx
Chapter One: The Beginning
Spencer is struggling. He always felt something for JJ. Last year he was in love with Maeve. But now… he’s developed a crush on Derek Morgan. He cannot think clearly anymore, because of Derek. He cannot sleep anymore, because of Derek. He wants to tell him about his feelings, but he’s afraid of his reaction, because they have been co-workers and friends for eight years now.
A few weeks later, Spencer decided to tell him. He told him that he wanted to talk to him alone, so after work, they went outside for a walk. After ten minutes of silence, Derek asked what’s on his mind. “I’m struggling…” Spencer said.
“About what?”
“About my feelings… for you. I love you…”
Spencer waited for a reaction, staring down at the ground. When he didn’t get a reaction after 45 seconds, he looked up at Derek. Derek raised his hand to touch Spencer’s face. Then… his head came slowly closer to Spencer’s… Till their lips found each other.
After minutes of kissing, Spencer suggested to go back to Derek’s car, so they can drive to his house to talk about what happened.
When they got there, Spencer felt a little uncomfortable, because he has never been to Derek’s house. The inside is a little sloppy, but Spencer didn’t minds. He sat down on a chair near Derek’s bed, where he was sitting.
“Where do you wanna talk about?” did Derek ask.
“About me, about us… We were both into girls. And since a few weeks, the only thing I could think about… was you. Your smiles, you saying ‘pretty boy’, your touches… Everything. And when you kissed me, in the middle of the street, where everybody could see us… I don’t know what to think.”
“I love you too, Spencer”
Derek looked Spencer in his eyes, so deeply, as he had never did with anyone before.
After two hours of talking, Spencer suggested to go home, because it’s late. But Derek told him that he could stay the night. Spencer was a little uncomfortable with that, because he had never slept with someone. But he decided to stay.
They talked and drank some, before they went to bed. They slept together in one bed, because Derek just only had one bed. Spencer fell asleep soon, because this day couldn’t have been more perfect. Derek watched him sleep and put his arm around him.
In the morning, when Spencer woke up, Derek was already out of bed.
“Derek, where are you?”
“In the kitchen, pretty boy!”
Derek was making breakfast for his co-worker.
“Derek, can we talk?” did Spencer ask.
“Sure pretty boy, where do you wanna talk about?”
“Why did you kiss me yesterday?”
“Because I like you…”
Derek walked to Spencer, with breakfast made for him. He put it on the nightstand. He gave him a kiss. Spencer answered his kiss by kissing him back softly, while he still was still in bed. Derek began to kiss him harder, and set his hands on Spencer’s hips, moving them under his shirt.
“Stop, Derek, we can’t do this. This isn’t right!”
Spencer tried to push him away, but he won’t succeed. Derek is too strong. Derek held Spencer by his wrists. He calmed down.
“Sorry Derek, I’m really sorry. It’s just new to me, all of this.”
“It’s also new to me.”
“It’s just going so fast. One moment we were just talking and the other moment you kissed me. When I was almost asleep, you put your arm around me. And then in the morning, you made me breakfast and tried to go further than kissing. I’m not saying I don’t like it, It’s just… I never really had a relationship before with someone I could see and touch everyday.”
“It’s OK if you want me to slow down, just tell me. All I wanna do is make you happy.” Was Derek’s reaction with a smile.
This was my first chapter/part/story. If you see any mistakes, please comment that below so I can change it.
I hope you like it.
bye xxx
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