my Moreid fanfiction story part 1

hello, in my previous post I told you that I write Moreid fanfiction myself. I don't think they are very good, but I'm growing in my writing skills because I write every day. Today I wanted to post the first chapter/part/story, so here it is:

Chapter One: The Beginning

Spencer is struggling. He always felt something for JJ. Last year he was in love with Maeve. But now… he’s developed a crush on Derek Morgan. He cannot think clearly anymore, because of Derek. He cannot sleep anymore, because of Derek. He wants to tell him about his feelings, but he’s afraid of his reaction, because they have been co-workers and friends for eight years now.

A few weeks later, Spencer decided to tell him. He told him that he wanted to talk to him alone, so after work, they went outside for a walk. After ten minutes of silence, Derek asked what’s on his mind. “I’m struggling…” Spencer said.

“About what?”

“About my feelings… for you. I love you…”

Spencer waited for a reaction, staring down at the ground. When he didn’t get a reaction after 45 seconds, he looked up at Derek. Derek raised his hand to touch Spencer’s face. Then… his head came slowly closer to Spencer’s… Till their lips found each other.

After minutes of kissing, Spencer suggested to go back to Derek’s car, so they can drive to his house to talk about what happened.

When they got there, Spencer felt a little uncomfortable, because he has never been to Derek’s house. The inside is a little sloppy, but Spencer didn’t minds. He sat down on a chair near Derek’s bed, where he was sitting.

“Where do you wanna talk about?” did Derek ask.

“About me, about us… We were both into girls. And since a few weeks, the only thing I could think about… was you. Your smiles, you saying ‘pretty boy’, your touches… Everything. And when you kissed me, in the middle of the street, where everybody could see us… I don’t know what to think.”

“I love you too, Spencer”

Derek looked Spencer in his eyes, so deeply, as he had never did with anyone before.

After two hours of talking, Spencer suggested to go home, because it’s late. But Derek told him that he could stay the night. Spencer was a little uncomfortable with that, because he had never slept with someone. But he decided to stay.
They talked and drank some, before they went to bed. They slept together in one bed, because Derek just only had one bed. Spencer fell asleep soon, because this day couldn’t have been more perfect. Derek watched him sleep and put his arm around him.

In the morning, when Spencer woke up, Derek was already out of bed.

“Derek, where are you?”

“In the kitchen, pretty boy!”

Derek was making breakfast for his co-worker.

“Derek, can we talk?” did Spencer ask.

“Sure pretty boy, where do you wanna talk about?”

“Why did you kiss me yesterday?”

“Because I like you…”

Derek walked to Spencer, with breakfast made for him. He put it on the nightstand. He gave him a kiss. Spencer answered his kiss by kissing him back softly, while he still was still in bed. Derek began to kiss him harder, and set his hands on Spencer’s hips, moving them under his shirt.

“Stop, Derek, we can’t do this. This isn’t right!”

Spencer tried to push him away, but he won’t succeed. Derek is too strong. Derek held Spencer by his wrists. He calmed down.

“Sorry Derek, I’m really sorry. It’s just new to me, all of this.”

“It’s also new to me.”

“It’s just going so fast. One moment we were just talking and the other moment you kissed me. When I was almost asleep, you put your arm around me. And then in the morning, you made me breakfast and tried to go further than kissing. I’m not saying I don’t like it, It’s just… I never really had a relationship before with someone I could see and touch everyday.”

“It’s OK if you want me to slow down, just tell me. All I wanna do is make you happy.” Was Derek’s reaction with a smile.




This was my first chapter/part/story. If you see any mistakes, please comment that below so I can change it.

I hope you like it.

bye xxx

Moreid fanfictions

hello, since Thursday, I found a new thing I like: reading Moreid (Morgan/Reid) fanfictions. Since that day, I have read more than 100 story's online. Some story's are for 18+, and I'm not (I'm 16 since two weeks), but I still like to read them. I will post some links to the sites from story's I loved.

http://zarathuse.livejournal.com/57919.html

http://archiveofourown.org/works/108623?view_adult=true

http://carolinecrane.livejournal.com/719007.html

http://archiveofourown.org/works/440576

http://archiveofourown.org/works/197394

http://just-jasper.livejournal.com/142621.html

http://sperrywink.livejournal.com/196346.html

http://just-jasper.livejournal.com/134154.html

http://archiveofourown.org/works/287482

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7355409/1/

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6400403/1/

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7015045/1/

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6461832/1/

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6455972/1/

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372976/1/

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6392066/1/Busted

Some of them are cute, some of them are sad, some of them make you laugh so hard and some of them make you cry. But they are all very good written and I loved them.

Since Thursday I've been writing some story's myself. They are shorter than most of the story's above and less good I think, because my mother language is not English, so there may be some mistakes. Also I'm not very experienced in writing and stuff. And I'm only 16, so I don't think I'm ready to write 18+ story's yet. I've written three chapters/parts/story's so far and I'm working on a fourth. The first two story's are very short, but the third story is larger and the fourth even more, so I'm probably growing in my writing skills. I'll post the first chapter/part/story in my next post.

I hope you like these story's.

bye xxx

New drawings

Hello, a few day ago, I made two drawings at school when I was bored. The first is a picture from episode 'Zugzwang', when Spencer and Blake were playing chess and talked about Maeve. Blake is cut off and you see an imagination of Maeve. The second drawing is made from two pictures, one is Matthew Gray Gubler and one is me, although it doesn't look very much like me. The hat MGG is wearing wasn't at the picture, but I didn't feel like doing that haircut because it is very hard to draw.

I hope you like them

Bye xxx